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Aug
28
2011

Six Sentence Sunday 8/28

It’s Sunday again. CLICK HERE for the list of participating authors. As always, thank you to everyone who stops by my blog to read and comment on my snippet each week!

This week I’m giving you another little snippet from my upcoming release LOVE AND LATTES, A Meadow Ridge Romance. It is available on 9.10.11 everywhere or for pre-order now from the Silver website. Click HERE if you’d like more info.

This snippet happens right after Chase learns Julia is his new employee! Yikes. Not good for them since they’d like a repeat of their steamy night together…

Chase sat on the bench out front of the store trying to enjoy the warm early spring air, but his thoughts were too clouded for even the heat of the sun to break through. Women hurried past him, shopping bags gripped tightly in their hands as they walked back to their Mercedes, and BMWs, and over-priced SUVs. They wore heels so high he wondered how they didn’t just topple over on the spindly spikes. As the click of their heels faded into the distance, he groaned and rubbed a hand across his forehead. Those were perfect examples of the girls he was tired of dating. Why couldn’t one of them work for him instead of Julia?

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24 comments

  1. Xakara says:

    Great to see them both so caught up! 🙂

    ~Xakara
    A Way To A Dragon’s Heart 6SS

  2. Gem Sivad says:

    I think they are fighting the inevitable. Great imagery.

  3. Alix says:

    Great picture you painted in just 6. Well done.

  4. Graylin Fox says:

    Awe. Poor guy is smitten with an employee. *grin* Whatsoever will he do?

  5. Amy Durham says:

    Great 6! Love those tortured heroes!

    Amy Durham

  6. Lisa Fox says:

    That is a great scene you painted! Poor Chase!

  7. Taryn Kincaid says:

    Nicely done.

  8. Liz says:

    Nice scene and makes me want more.

  9. Jennifer Probst says:

    Great visual and description – I can’t wait to get this book. And it issues on MY BIRTHDAY – hooray!!!

  10. charmaine gordon says:

    You packed a lot of imagery and senses into this six. Good writing.

  11. Eleri Stone says:

    Tangled in knots, poor guy.

  12. Lex Valentine says:

    He’s so torn poor baby!

  13. Dee Carney says:

    Wow, this is very nicely done. Love his introspection.

  14. Hailey Edwards says:

    I hear him on the high heels. I never have understood the appeal of them. Or maybe it’s my feet that haven’t. 😉

    Poor guy. Getting what you think you want is never as much fun as getting what you actually need.

  15. Vivien Jackson says:

    Maybe he doesn’t pay enough to support their shopping lifestyle. 🙂 If she’s so unlike those gals, I think I might dig his Julia.

  16. Angela S. Stone (@AngelaSStone) says:

    Fantastic six! I’m really excited for this release!

  17. lexcade says:

    Poor guy. I love how, instead of ogling the women, he’s comparing them to Julia and finding them lacking 😉 Speaks to his character in my opinion. Great six!

  18. Bree Younger says:

    Great description and I love his inner conflict!

  19. Vivien Dean says:

    I love this guy. Great job!

  20. Aimee Laine says:

    Oh those heels! I often think the very same thing! 🙂

  21. Lynne Murray says:

    Congrats on the September release! The hero sounds like a a true hero–with too much integrity to take advantage of an employee. Hmm, what’s a guy to do? Great hook into the story!

  22. Kerrianne says:

    Very telling, a great six!

  23. 1000t.monkey says:

    You are doing a nice job with characterization 🙂 Can’t wait to get further into the story 🙂

  24. Layna Pimentel says:

    Would love to feel sorry for him, but this is for the best. I’m hoping. 😉 I wish the 10th would get here fast.

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