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Aug
14
2011

Six Sentence Sunday 8/14

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This week’s snippet is from my wip Star Struck. Our hero has just met our heroine for the first time.

She was even more stunning up close—her long hair a mess of auburn waves and curls falling down to the middle of her back. Small twigs and little flecks of grass sprouted from her head as if she’d barrel-rolled down a tall hill on her way to him. She wore a long, flowing sundress and sandals that looked like she should be on the beaches of Maui instead of in the middle of Central Park.

“Sorry,” she said. Her gaze met his and he could tell instantly that her eyes were most likely her best feature, even if he couldn’t make out the color. There was a quality about them that captivated him, making it impossible to break her gaze.

 

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  1. Kerrianne says:

    A really nice six… I want more! xx

  2. Taryn Kincaid says:

    Great description.

  3. Alix says:

    Fantastic descriptive six. I love he is caught in the gaze. Thank you.

  4. Sandi Sookoo says:

    cute description. Love the “barrel roll” comment lol

  5. Lisa Fox says:

    Great description! I can totally see her.

  6. Gem Sivad says:

    Sweet description and she does sound captivating. Great six!

  7. charmaine gordon says:

    dynamite, Heather. Good six.

  8. Layna Pimentel says:

    Love the description her Heather. Great job!

  9. Suzie Quint says:

    Love that she’s sprouting twigs and grass. Great image.

  10. Jessica Subject says:

    Wonderful description! If he’s captivated by her eyes, he’s in trouble. LOL

  11. Jessica Knauss says:

    Wonderful description — entrancing and with a touch of humor.

  12. Marie Dees says:

    Nice description. Love the details with the grass. That made it for me.

  13. Dee Carney says:

    Love the way he’s instantly smitten. So sweet.

  14. Lex Valentine says:

    Love the grass part. LOL

  15. Liz Culver says:

    Nicely written moment – very visual. Great six.

  16. Janet Lane Walters says:

    Good sentences. Do like your cover. I’m finally nearly caught up with where I should be in time and space/

  17. Sandy Nachlinger says:

    I really enjoyed your description, especially “barrel rolled down a tall hill.” Your six sentences made me want to know more about this unusual woman!

  18. Jennifer Lowery (Kamptner) says:

    Great six! Loved the ‘barrel rolled’! Thanks for sharing!

  19. Vivien Dean says:

    Based on that description, it’s easy to see why she might captivate him.

  20. Laura Kaye says:

    Very sweet meet!

  21. Cheryl M. says:

    Love the vivid description of her hair. Being a bit of a mess makes her more real. Love it.

  22. Lucy Felthouse says:

    Brilliant descriptive six, well done 🙂

  23. E. Jamie says:

    Lovely six!

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